[VIDEO]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=twROe7c5Jkg]YouTube - Berry Bittersweet Part II[/VIDEO]
What would make that better? What needs changed?
Suggestions so far:
- better development of ideas
- delay is too overpowering in parts
- more emphasis on root notes in the intro
It's very sloppy - the whole things is only about two hours old, but I've been so engrossed in it I've kind of lost my neutral perspective now. Is it any good?
That was really cool.
I agree with the delay thing, though it will be hard to find a happy medium since it makes the sound in some parts of the song.
I think "more development of ideas" would be a better term to use.