the demo these songs are from was recorded in Feb. of this year. I decided to put some up on youtube to see what happens. thought i'd share with you guys and see what you think. running blind out here where im the only metal guitarist for 100 miles lol thanks for listening and don't hold back; let me know what you think
[VIDEO]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_mmAa9OoiBc&feature=channel]YouTube - Polar Opposites[/VIDEO]
[VIDEO]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XuSDVDxnPjk&feature=channel]YouTube - Axis of Inspiration[/VIDEO]
I like it, it's kind of thrash with a punk twist which is pretty cool. It's a bit of a cacophony with the drums though, they don't have enough definition to tell what's going on at that tempo. I think you should change the kick. Also make sure you keep the vocals tighter, the beginning of polar opposites could have had a better tone, but closer to the yelling bit and the yelling bit fit really well with the song in my opinion.
Axis has some really cool riffs going on, but I think it needs more of a hook somewhere to separate the chorus, maybe like a higher vocal part going ahhhh or ohhh or whatever. I think it needs a solo over part of the staccato rhythm part too. The end is sweet!
I dig it , I could see it going over really well live. Also I'm being completely honest, I would tell you straight up if I thought it sucked . Do you write everything yourself or are there other members?