so i've been playing guitar for almost a year now, and and started writing my own riffs about a month ago or so, lookin for some opinions, critique, comments, these recordings are not the best the its the best that i have at the moment till i get some recording programs.
[VIDEO]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2EoP3T6jChQ&context=C310459dADOEgsToPDskIb EipDD38w-gDfpBOzIU1H]song2 - YouTube[/VIDEO]
[VIDEO]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ADpggIw76bY&context=C35ea139ADOEgsToPDskJ9 x1_PFWdErlERpA1x1vmO]song1wip 0001 - YouTube[/VIDEO]
Good lad for putting early stuff out there for critique.
Your timing is off in a lot of places. Learn about timing (as in meters, beat divisions and bar lengths) and practice to a metronome.
That one is very good.
Your playing could also be cleaner; hitting strings youre not supposed to and what have you, not articulating a lot of notes well. Taking it slow with a met will help with this.
Recording riffs and trying to double track them can also be a highly effective educational tool.
Sorry if this seems harsh, but you did ask.