This is an older song, that we thought had potential but was too "classic" sounding, so we are working on making it a bit more modern sounding. This is not the full song, just verse and chorus of how it's coming so far. There are keys there...string section, I want them to come in bigger for the chrous...thicker, more strings. The chorus vocal pattern isn't quite there and it's getting harmonies too. Harmonies are all me. Been getting quite better at the backup vocal thing, I had to yell some of those notes though...having a cold sucks.
...and with non ringing ears, I make it sound a bit better.