Been working on this just about all day on and off.... hot as SHIT in my studio... I need a bigger window unit up here pronto...really hinders me during the middle of the day, which is usually when ideas really pop in my head. I did get this song restructured quite a bit though. I'm digging it so far, but I might change the second verse riff, make it a little louder, and keep the drums in there instead of stopping again...I need to hear the new one with Vocals before deciding on that though.
and the original version:
Sounds infinitely better this time around!
The kick sounds a little odd to me, though. Don't know how to place it, it's just weird to my ears.