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Sounds good, I think you're off to a really good start.
I think it needs to be tightened up a bit, though - it's got the loud and big sound that people are typically going for in metal, but it feels a little flubby to me overall - specifically with the bass guitar, and possibly some low frequencies in the guitars.
I'd start with a little multiband compression to keep those low frequencies from peaking.