[Josh]

Sounds great! It needs the cello line in the verse though

Some harmonies in the chorus would definitely help.

Also, you might want to rerecord the vocal bit around 2:27. I like how you changed it up from the original, but there are a couple of clams there pitchwise

 

[Josh]

Yeah, definitely some things I was thinking, I kind of mimicked the cello line in the intro with the effects-drenched-ebow-guitar :lol: And yeah, some pitchy parts near the end are the parts I was thinking need the most fixing.

If my electric cello wasn't in New Jersey right now, I would totally track that for you.

We used to do that one in my cover band, and the second guitar player would play bass while I swapped for cello.

 

[Josh]

I tend to critique Aaron's stuff a little more harshly since I know he can fix it :yesway: