[eleven59]

So, I did some work on one of my unfinished songs that I've posted before. I re-tracked vocals and added some things to the ending that I was planning on adding for a while. Let me know what you think.

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[Kim]

I like it, don't think I've heard it before. I specially liked the bass sound you've got going.

 

[Professor Squidbeard]

the strumming patterns on each side are different and take my attention away from everything else as they sound like they are panned hard L - R so they really stand out.

 

[eleven59]

Yeah, the strumming isn't quite tight enough, that's something I'll probably fix once I have new strings on my acoustic.

 

[Professor Squidbeard]

not trying to bag on your work man, you can sing better now, than i'll ever be able to. Just trying to give good feedback on the song.

 

[eleven59]

not trying to bag on your work man, you can sing better now, than i'll ever be able to. Just trying to give good feedback on the song.

Definitely, glad to have it, that's why I post these things That was definitely something I was planning on fixing, just wanted to share the added parts on the ending and the updated vocals.

 

[Soopahmahn]

The strumming is beautiful. It sounds like there are just two musicians together jamming, striking up a groove, not a squeaky-clean cut. It reminds me of jamming at folk festivals.

Somehow the bass guitar sound doesn't sound like much more than pops and clicks to me. I thought it would fill in the low end more. I'm not sure how to explain this.

Regardless, I let this take me away for a couple of minutes. It was excellent. Thank you. Is that the full track?

 

[ccavera]

I like it. Bass does sound a little thin...but it works somehow. Cool tune. :yesway:

 

[Jason]

Sounds good as usual Aaron. Its funny we both kind agre up on the same music and our writing styles are very similar :lol:

 

[eleven59]

Sounds good as usual Aaron. Its funny we both kind agre up on the same music and our writing styles are very similar :lol:

Thanks man

Yeah, the bass tone I'm not 100% sold on yet, but I'm sure this'll get a re-mix/master when everything else is done.